Cruella Deville - Fast Eddy (Revised)

Hey guys, it's been a while since my last post, I've been a bit distracted with the writing of a graphic novel. But I've been working on this one since the Evil theme. I've been keen to play around with composition after reading a really good book on that subject. So I started off with this...



Making sure that the shapes related well with each other before going into fleshing out the character and adding details. I'm relatively happy with this final image but I'm also aware that something is wrong with it, although I can't put my finger on it. So if anyone has any ideas, they would be very welcome before I pull all my hair out...



And here is the revised one, I've removed a little of the fur coat on the left hand side and also cropped closer on the left hand side of the frame... (Thanks for the tips guys!)